2nd Rough Cut

Feedback.

Year 11 - Ages 15 - 16
Titles aren't consistent
Music is too loud at the beginning
They really liked the use of the news reporters
They liked the use of the shoes and jeans at the puddle
They didn't like the use of the static sound effect when the man appears in the mirror
They loved the use of the girl in the mirror and how the man appears
It keeps you interested
Love the sound in the background
Maybe we should use some more different camera angles
Pictures matched the genre
Some parts were hard to see due to the lighting
The images that were flashing in and out could be a bit longer as they couldn't see them
16 out of 25 wanted to watch the rest of the film

Year 13 - Ages 17 - 18
These are media students so they are looking at the film at a different perspective
Need to sort out the titles
The news reports are really good
One of the news reporters is on the screen for too long before they actually speak
The font doesn't go with the genre
Font needs to be more white rather than blue to enable better vision of it
Love the title

They think that we should change the opening completely so that its all back to front and we see the kitchen scene before the news reports.